Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Sunday, 8 September 2013

Did You Ever Poem


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In class we have been learning how to write a 'Did You Ever' Poem! I found it quite easy because it only can have 2 words in a paragraph!  
The start, starts with the question Did/Have You Ever 
Your question
Subject | Verb x3 
Then an ending question!
Simple as that! I literally could make hundreds of these! I could make them for a living!!!
Hope you liked it :)
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~ Catherine

Wednesday, 4 September 2013

Should We Ban Plastic | Argument



This is an argument about Banning Plastic. I learnt that you had to set the argument like this..
~Set out you're points evenly, good, bad, good, bad
~Use phrases to show different point of view
~First paragraph has to tell what you are arguing about
~In your conclusion add your personal opinion

I found it really easy because I had experience in my other argument which I did earlier and I actually have to say I really improved! I included more details and make it really interesting!

~ Catherine

Tuesday, 13 August 2013

Poverty Speech




This term the whole of year 5 and 6's had to do a speech! I wanted my speech topic to be unique and memorable, at first I chose the topic 'Brothers' and I finished it but I wasn't 100% happy with it so I changed it at the last minute to 'POVERTY' and I'm actually quite happy with it and it's good enough :) I didn't make it into the speech finals but that's okay! At least I proved that I can write a speech and present it (confidently), AND IM PROUD OF MYSELF

If you have any feedback or questions PLEASE leave a comment in the comment box down below! I would love to know what other people think of it :D
~Catherine

Tuesday, 2 July 2013

What Why How Chart


This is a What Why How Chart. It's a new way of planning a persuasive piece of writing. I used it to plan out my B.B Ball T.V Commercial. I really helped me to know what I'm writing about and what I should do...  
~ Catherine

How does Rubbish Affect Marine Life?


How does rubbish affect marine life?
In NZ there are hundreds and hundreds of people dropping plastic rubbish and they seem to not know or not care where the rubbish leads to and what happens to it. All rubbish goes down drains and drains leads to the ocean...
People drop rubbish on the ground either if it’s accidental or on purpose. It gets caught by the wind and goes out to the sea! Or it gets down the stormwater drains and then goes to the sea. When it gets to the ocean it floats on the surface on the water and then sea creatures think its food for them to eat! 100,000 sea animals die each year. All the leftover rubbish that is floating gets caught in gyres and most of the plastic goes to north of Hawai’i. There is this type of plastic that is THE WORST it is called ‘nurdles’ They are 3.33 millimeter plastic things and are the base of most plastic products.  Fish eats the plastic and also goes up the food chain. Environmentalists and Scientists say that the oil from the plastic and from the fish act like magnets, even if we don’t eat the stomach of the fish you eat the meat and the stomach and the meat attract each other so the meat has the dirty, disgusting oil.Things like bottle tops, plastic containers, plastic bottles get photo-degraded which means it gets broken down by the sun and turns into 10,000,000 small pieces of plastic. Or Bio-degrade which means it breaks down naturally.  Later on a little fish will eat the plastic and a bigger fish will eat the small fish so on and so on. At the end the biggest fish gets all the plastic from the other fishes and you might not know the fish could end up on your dinner plate. That there is called Bio-accumulate, it around and around the food chain. If we keep doing this we will have no more beautiful blue beaches,seas and no more fishing for fresh fish anymore because all the fish would’ve probably died.  No one would go to the beach and do fun fun things.  NZ is known for our beaches, tourists won’t come and visit NZ and our population will go down and probably NZ, sea creatures and even birds will become extinct. 100,000 sea mammals die each year! You can help by reducing the amount of plastic rubbish and when you see a piece of rubbish don’t just walk past it pick it up! A little can do ALOT! Be awesome and do everything you can to help the ocean!

By: Catherine